CONSTRUCTION: RE FILMING THE LIBRARY SCENE

After receiving feedback about our previous piece of library filming we have decided to re film some certain parts of this. This is because of the fact that the previous piece of filming was giving no clues as to who could be leaving the post it notes. We felt that it was extremely important to give the audience a hint of suspicion as to who could be leaving the notes. 

Therefore we decided to go back and re film certain parts of the film, however this time we had the "nice guy" character in the background to hint to the audience that it is him who is leaving the notes. 

This filming is a lot more successful as it leads the audience to suspect that it is this character leaving the notes however they soon find out that it was not him, meaning that there is a twist which is one convention of a short film. 

UPDATING MY TRELLO

After sitting together and watching what we had of our short film we have come together to discuss some changes that we feel could make the narrative a lot better. For example there are no clues that the player did not leave the sticky note thus we have decided to re-do this filming to hint that the player did not leave the notes.