CONSTRUCTION: FEEDBACK

After showing the Bedroom Scene to a group of people who fit our target audience they gave us feedback. They said that they liked the camera angles that we used such as the pan shot of the girl touching her makeup. They also liked the shot of the girl in the mirror as this gave an 'exciting' way to show her.

Although we got a lot of good feedback there was some negative feedback about the phone call. They said that it was very boring to listen and watch. Therefore we have decided that we should change this so that it is more interesting for the viewer. To do this we have decided to not use a script so that she seems more relaxed. We have also decided to use a variety of cut away shots when editing for example close ups of her mouth. This means that there will be exciting camera angles and also different things going on, rather than simply watching her on the phone.

BEFORE FEEDBACK

AFTER FEEDBACK