Wednesday 14 January 2015

CONSTRUCTION: FEEDBACK


After receiving feedback on our piece of date filming we have decided that we must film it once more.

The main reasons that we thought that we should do this is because of the fact that the sound is unclear. The conservation between the two character is blurry due to the loud background noise

Another reason we have to re film is because it is boring for the audience to watch. Although there are a variety of camera angles, there needs to be some more close ups. For example we have decided to have a close up of their champagne glasses.

Finally we also thought that the actual script was boring and does not give any hints that the boy is a player. Therefore we are going to write a script which gives hints that he is player and is not the actual person that left the post it notes.

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